Looking through someone else's eyes part one

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Part one: A miss communication

(Well you know when your having one of those days? I was. It all started yesterday on my birthday. I was turning 17 and everyone seemed in a better mood at school since it was a special day. On a normal Monday, everyone would be yelling at me and telling me to get a life. Well this day was different, I guess everyone was happy that since it was my birthday that we got half of school and get to go home early. Even the teachers were saying: “Happy Birthday Anna!!!!” When everything was exactly perfect, some girl bumped into me. “Watch it!!” I yelled at the girl who was trembling at the sound of my voice. “Sorry” she mumbled and quickly ran and bumped into more people on her way to class. “What’s wrong with her?” I thought as I went to my last class. I remember meeting her at orientation and her having a bunch a bruises down her arms and legs. I think her name was Kate. Everyone seemed to tease her a lot when she first came here. They would always try to rhyme her name with something bad. But she would just be silent and go to her class. I pondered all this while I walked home. After I got into the house and when I got a chorus of “Happy Birthdays” I went to my room to get to bed. After I got out of the shower I decided to look in my full sized mirror to see if I got all the soap out of my hair. My mom said when she got it the person who gave it to her, he said it was guarded by the angels that were around the rim and that if you looked hard enough you could see someone else’s life through there eyes. I didn’t think it was real, so I never looked at it a lot. So when I finally looked at it, through some really clear eyes I saw it. Curled up in a ball in the mirror was Kate. She was crying and blubbering something that I couldn’t understand. Until, she started shouting: “I WISH I WAS NEVER BORN!!!!” and when she said that I finally saw them. They look like people but except with white wings and white robes, they looked like they were trying to comfort her even though they couldn’t touch her. But then she shouted again: “I WISH I WAS SOMEONE ELSE!!!” And then the angels disappeared. The next thing I knew I was fast asleep. When I woke up, I was in a different room. It didn’t look the same color and the walls were different, and I found myself with almost dried tears on my face. And then I heard an unfamiliar voice start yelling: “GET UP FOR SCHOOL YOUR GOING TO BE LATE!!!! DON’T MAKE ME COME UP THERE AND GET YOU OUT OF BED!!!!” As soon as I heard that I got up and started to get ready but when I was looking for my uniform I saw the same mirror from my old room. Then there was someone who was knocking on my door and then said: “Kate, come on we’ll be late for the bus and I don’t think mom will be very happy about that.” And when I heard that it all clicked, I was Kate and she probably was me. But I wonder if I will be able to turn back into my usual self.)

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